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Nov 12, 2022·edited Nov 12, 2022Author

As with most people who write, I look back on this with a writer’s vicious, attacking self critique. The view from the bridge of growth, hey?

I see clichés and lazy, clumsy, obvious rhymes… …

BUT in its defence, I think what it has going for it, is the ability to frame a situation from the point of view of a child and in doing so is able to capture emotions and perspective otherwise difficult to grasp.

And people seemed to like it at the time I put it out. Often poems are so up their own arse they cannot be absorbed by those who most need to hear the message.

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Nov 12, 2022Liked by Julie Dee

Julie the wordsmith strikes again!

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This was one of the first poems I put *out there* on social media.

I think that writing from the perspective of a child can be a good way of conveying the absurdity of a situation.

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