Thanks. I posted this and then it kind of spooked me. Felt a little exposed, vulnerable, almost took it down, maybe I still will. But I wanted to post it in case someone else could relate. At least they will feel a little less lonely with it, hey?
I love the way it is framed by the first and last sentence being in first person but the rest being in third. Puts it in a box and gives you, as the writer, a hint of emotional distance from the subject matter.
Thanks. Yes I originally wrote it in first person but I couldn’t seem to wrap it up. I don’t even really know what I’d call it. So I changed it to third and then sort of encased it, yeah.
You see, I wrote this and then laughing at myself (as I always do when I’ve written something dark or intense), thought;
“or actually, you could just be a stalker or one of these nut jobs who cries over the royal family and shit”
I know, I know….😉😂
You are proving to be a prodigious talent at this writing malarkey Julie. I’m so envious.
Thank you. That’s kind :)
Amazing, Julie. I love this, it certainly resonates with me! Keep up the brilliant work. 💖
Thank you Karen. I just let my mind go where it wants to and see what comes out…😂😂 xx
Thanks. I posted this and then it kind of spooked me. Felt a little exposed, vulnerable, almost took it down, maybe I still will. But I wanted to post it in case someone else could relate. At least they will feel a little less lonely with it, hey?
I love the way it is framed by the first and last sentence being in first person but the rest being in third. Puts it in a box and gives you, as the writer, a hint of emotional distance from the subject matter.
Thanks. Yes I originally wrote it in first person but I couldn’t seem to wrap it up. I don’t even really know what I’d call it. So I changed it to third and then sort of encased it, yeah.