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Shaking off winter is always a struggle but the first signs of early spring flowers does lift the spirits.

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Absolutely

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Nothing weary about the pace of this poem. It has a rhythm like you’re trudging towards something, with purpose that is perhaps undefined, but is forward motion nonetheless.

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Once Christmas is over and the evenings start getting lighter, Spring looks closer and there are signs of new life, we start to feel better. Know there’s a way to go but we’re over half way there…optimism is how the human spirit survives.

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I feel this. I am tired of battling this harsh winter and am eagerly anticipating the promise of spring now 🌞

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I wrote this one in a Leonard Cohen style drone, enjoying the rhythm of a downbeat train passing through my body.

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February 3, 2023
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A grandchild in the Spring, hey? My birthday is in April and I have always thought Spring is a nice time to be born. :)

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