As a child, I was always drawn to children with older siblings.
It felt like a ‘2 for 1’ deal.
You got the friend your own age, but you also got the worldliness their older sibling(s) had bestowed upon them. Often, this acted as solid frame for my own wandering waif of misplaced nostalgia. The vague memories I had of time periods say, like the late 70s, would become much clearer when in the company of these kids because they had been schooled in the era by means of sibling repetition.
One friend used to tell me, for example, how her brother would ring her up and pretend he was ‘Buzby’.
I loved that story because whenever she told it, my distant, fuzzy fondness for the cartoon, yellow bird was brought immediately to life as she gave it meaning and context.
At every family reunion funeral, without fail, my older cousins recall the time they persuaded me to take all my clothes off and climb into the horse trough. I remember none of this. Yet somehow, it has become embedded as family folklore I’ve absorbed, to the point I sometimes mistakenly adopt the memory as my own real one.
These poems are about the glaze we baste our past (and futures) in and the carcasses we pick at. The various ways memories emerge.
‘Pining’ is an interesting concept to me, the idea of dying of a broken heart seems to me a very bleak yet romantic death.
‘Hankering’ is another word I feel affinity with, it’s a more positive word just meaning a strong want or desire, yet so often is used in reference to something the person knows already. People hanker after tastes they miss, for example. ‘Hanker’ also leads me to think of handkerchiefs and how people would knot them to remind themselves of something.
‘Longing’ is another word I enjoy, the measurement aspect instantly revealing the size of the feeling. In ‘Take This Longing’ by Leonard Cohen, both mental and physical images combine to convey the ache of need as a hungry whole.
Of course, it goes without saying these poems are a tad depressing. I’ve accepted most of my poems are. Still, I remind myself it’s not all I am, is it? It’s just how that side of me tends to out itself.
I will give the meanings of the poems at the end. Photos my own.
Pressed Flowers
Our book of flowers fell open
Once more I was acquainted
With the crimson trounce of poppies
After innocence of daisies
Buttercups wheeled stories
Felt their pail of smile pour on me
Had to close the memories quickly
Like a country lady’s diary
Asked myself why gold must leave us
Have its shine and weight deceive
Why some blooms are tombs we bury
Why some hurried tombs unsealed
Into old fields, I went walking
Checked my dress and found rogue grasses
How I felt your presence gently
Cause some traffic never passes
People hang as wardrobed seasons
Nettle reasons sting as sore
Sometimes, petals clinging most
Time’s hands cared little for
On the surface you’ve forgotten
Seems you graze on us less often
But I knew you as a first dew
And that Spring has never left you
Octobering
Octobering is sobering
The plunging fall of Fall
September wept remembering
A summer’s golden mile
Spent my Venus spring time spelling
Potions made for Mars
Cauldron full of storytelling
Caution cast to stars
Half light outs the moon hare
Hiding in the hallowed fog
Stirs my shroud of foil to leave
Await December dogs
November last on Autumn list
The tumbledown now done
Winter canters in from mist
Assembling end to come
Pining
Word I need is ‘pining’
When your body aches for someone
When your throat, a valve, is closing
Then your eyes mist up as windows
.
Sometimes, a person’s with you
But they’re not the one you’re missing
Breathing, present, a spectator
Lost in films you cannot enter
Mouth betrays a feeling
Errant smile leaves loosened lips
Muscles move at sepia jokes
Then jolt…..it’s just a memory
Bolts from the blue or screws that tighten?
Wrenching ‘was’ and pinning ‘mights’
Out on the moor night after night
As flags are flown, you clasp your kite
How you clamber life, a zombie
Masking in your flesh and bone
Expressions spill confessions
But we ride ghost trains alone
.
Self-harm soul is gold dust mining
Bittersweet, intent on finding
Relic pearls that mock as wisdom
Fossil words you failed to give them
Jewel chats in arms of urns
Negotiating hosting genies
Rusted lungs of silence screaming
Landlords with no right to be there
Set the scene and l’ll come running
Love a chance to rake the coals
Dissect every happy outcome
Butcher long gone cold post-mortems
Hoodlums, bedlam, bedrooms, boredom
Car crashes? Let’s watch the reruns
Re-dig graves with pointed shovels
Nine lives worth of body doubles
.
Architects that dreamt of rubble
Wars that knocked and meant no trouble
Wells that couldn’t come together
Fickle trickles, never rivers
Screeching plates, they keep on spinning
Piles of laundry, cook the dinner
The gracious losing patience
As they’re jealous of a space you visit
Forgive me if I seem to be
Away with fairies you can’t see
My body snared by drifting trance
A shifting raw that makes no sense
Nostalgia called for one more dance
And I felt compelled to pine
Pressed Flowers
Pressed Flowers is about first love. The daisies representing the purity followed by the passion of red (poppies) and then the gold (love). ‘Petals that cling the most times hands care little for’ is acknowledging that some brief encounters stay in the heart more than a long relationship. Love does not recognise human ideas of measurement, it loves what it loves. The last part is the knowing that you may also someone’s first love. They will never forget you either.
Octobering
Was having a ‘smell the coffee’ day and that first line popped in my head. The idea of being in a daze then one day going ‘Woah!’. Then started thinking of the (popular, over used, I know!) idea of the seasons of life, youth as Spring etc. The line about Venus and potions made for Mars is about self image and in youth seeing oneself as ‘for’ the opposite sex, purposely cultivating attraction. I liked the idea of the older female as a hare both hidden by leaves (her wise woman qualities) but gradually becoming exposed to death (dogs). Moon (intuition) because she is now more self aware. I liked the sounds of winter and canter together, and also the image because people always say time speeds up as you age.
I like the photo because that telegraph pole always reminds me of a May pole as I pass it. When you pass it in Autumn and winter, that image takes on a dark, mocking tone.
Pining
Sometimes I smile to myself about something or a tell tale look comes over my face, and someone will pipe up “what are YOU thinking about?”. Often, you just don’t want to say because it’s your own little trip down memory lane/to fantasy island. Sometimes happy, other times not. I began thinking about the physical responses that so often accompany memories, how they give you away.
Structurally, I had fun writing this one, deliberately choosing couplets that both twinned or skipped a line, enjoying the gentle off key it created rather than a seamless ribbon rhythm. I did a similar thing with some of the words: ‘pining’, ‘pinning’.
“Bolts from the blue or screws that tighten” is a reference to how memories work, they can come to you instantly, or accompany you constantly like a prison guard, getting harder to bear. ‘Landlords with no right to be there’ is about those kind of people who think they own you.
Thank you for reading. Hope you found something relatable in there.
I don’t know that I specifically see doubt friends with older siblings but the ones who had older siblings I looked up too with much respect. It is a 2 for 1 deal. My best friend I have known since grade school I had an older sister— A year older much more mature than kids her age. In junior high school she taught us everything about what to wear, which songs to listen to introduced us to all the boys at the dances. Beautiful times! Thank you Julie!
October is my favourite and Pressed flowers 🌻 both very atmospheric,the wonder of our lives put together in a array of words and very meaningful.As always Julie 🦋🐦 good to read thanks.x