I dislike the phrase ‘suffer for your art’ because it sounds as though a person would deliberately put themselves through something in order to create. For me certainly, it’s the other way around. Pain can be so consuming that what else can you do with it except try to channel it somewhere?
Reading someone’s poetry, gives you a good measure of how a person feels. I don’t mean their mood, but rather, how deeply they suffer/are affected as a human.
I read some poems and I can tell the writer floats on life instead of immersing themself within it. Reading such work is like browsing tips on how to remove a stubborn carpet stain. It elicits a response similar to; “Yes, odours eh? Bit of bicarb, hun?”
What am I talking about?
About writing with as much soul as a night at Madame Tussaud’s.
That’s not to say those writing that stuff are incapable of emotion, but maybe they haven’t had an intense experience for a while. Love, grief, ecstasy, disaster, massive disappointment…..
Poetry is subjective I know, but when I read bland offerings, I wonder
“Fuck!!! How did it get to that point for you?”
It’s as though some people grow film over the hearts the way cataracts form to cover eyes, a process so slow that they don’t realise they’re no longer feeling. I want to slice open their veins or have a truck hit them. I want to smash their chest in with a pick axe to reach their heart, remind them it still beats. Reacquaint them with the colour of their own blood, their pulse.
I speak figuratively obviously, before you report me to some ‘community standards’.
(Only messing - like I give a shit.)
As a reader, I want to drown not float. I want to share in a feeling. Whether my poetry is your bag or not, I hope you at least feel some of the emotion I attempt to relay, because it’s real. Whether I’m writing about something recent or channeling an old memory.
I’m not going to go through the meanings this time. Today, it feels exhausting.
Beige
Mundanity, it gets to me
The trundle crawl of time
Whoever said “it goes so fast!”
Is welcome to take mine
Hours queue, a traffic jam
Tap fingers on the dashboard
Well worn routes, dull scenery
Repeat congested ring roads
Travelling, never reaching home
Perpetual frustration
Closures, detours, accidents
Extend the aggravation
Motorway, take me away
To where I’m supposed to be
I’m told I’m only here the once
There’s shit I’m s’posed to see
Round and round the bend I go
One woman in her cage
Clinging on to dreams of red
Whilst fighting rage of beige
Loves to watch me bleed
Loves to watch me bleed
A lust for pain is his desire
Must be water’s need
To cure a Phoenix of her fire
Lures me to a tower of strength
Escorts me to the top
Courts me on the dizzy heights
Before the certain drop
Hoping one day, things will change
His demons will be freed
Til then, I have a vampire
Who loves to watch me bleed
What then?
When you feel flat from idle chat
From point scoring and this n that
Had your fill of ‘world to rights’
Rants n banter, picking fights
Debates, fake mates and cheap soundbites
What then?
When you tire of funny memes
Of arguing that grass is green
Of all that’s wrong or words in songs
Of each new face that comes along
Of chaff from wheat and weak from strong
What then?
When only forms of company
That you can find at ten to three
Are strangers you will never see
You’ll tell yourself it had to be
Resign yourself to misery
Forget there ever was a me
But both of us…….
Know differently
Nothing for me
There’s nothing for me here, my dear
This old meandering river
The twists and turns
Sharp rocks and glass
Made victim of this lover
Once, I saw the way to sea
Now all I see is blue
Submerged in freeze, wasting disease
Prognosis; terminal you
Must take myself away so far
Condemn this heart to rot
Earth squirms with screams of restless souls
Who loved someone……..for what?
Our prizes blaze in arms of flame
In places angels fear
Once heaven felt so close, but no…..
There’s nothing for me here
Winds of change
The winds of change are whistling
I’ve been listening to their shrill
Shrieking, howling, hissing
Tortured cat upon bleak hill
I’m wondering what the message is
Those heathen chords relay
Treasures seem to up and go
Convinced they cannot stay
.
Winds of change won’t wait around
They scoop up what they’re taking
Rearrange the face of towns
No care for what they’re breaking
Flowers, branches, structures…..hearts
The elements plough on
Weak won’t survive the strongest parts
Unless secure, they’re gone
The bud that could not bloom
I had a bud I loved the best
I spoke to it each day
More beautiful than all the rest
Its wonder locked away
No wish to confine in a vase
I yearned to see it thrive
Feel rays of sun upon its form
Rejuvenate, revive
Some buds are tight, resist the light
Their hard stems made from moon
Not all that’s meant to will unfurl
Some buds, just cannot bloom
.
Perusing fields that ache their straw
I lend my eyes a pause
The sweet potential ploughed as weed
Limp poppies caught in war
Did they see it coming
Getting sucked into machines?
Chewed up gum in reckless mouths
Their splendour never seen
We nourish what we value most
Pay tolls to nature’s tune
Some meant to flourish will be lost
The buds, that could not bloom
Dark Nights
Dark nights they are a coming
Autumn drumming, light denied
Gold is summoned to a death
Exposing those who hide
Hibernate or face the chill
Of winter’s wending path
Sunkissed is replaced
By opal blisters of cold bath
.
Dark nights they are a coming
Fading twilight mauves to grey
Withering each hardy rose
To thorniest decay
Dark nights they are a coming
There’s no running from their call
Surrender token vanities
Displeased season takes them all
Book Burning
I miss you like a history book
Your cover bound in leather
Ageing pages falling
Barely holding shit together
Filling me with lore and law
So much I’ve still to learn
I wonder if I’ll get it back
Perhaps the book was burned
.
Lucky to have found you
Knew I’d stumbled on rare treasure
Devoured your crumbs of mystery
Poured over you for pleasure
Lessons and confessions
Every time a new page turned
Looking for my happy end
Perhaps the book was burned
.
Thickets form around the castle
Twilight is upon us
Save me from disaster
Or these old wolves shall outrun us
I fear you know a different tale
You heard a knight was spurned
Or maybe you no longer read
Perhaps the book was burned
.
And it’s true they’re burning books again
Just looks a little different
Wielding power all the same
The greedy and abhorrent
But some stories transcend their bind
To live in heart shaped nooks
Potent as a vintage wine
However burned the book
I hope you got something from some of these, that one or some of them spoke to you in some way. Thanks for reading. I appreciate your comments.
I now have more than 300 pieces on substack! If you enjoyed this piece, you can find more poems under the heading ‘poems’ on my home page.
All of em! 🩷 But The Winds Of Change resonates at the moment for me ✨️ xx
What then? Resonates with me Julie..
As always your talent astounds x