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This first poem I called ‘Rain Chef’ as I was listening to the sweet summer rain one night, thinking how the splattering sounds reminded me of fried food cooking. I started considering how I was snug in bed and couldn’t feel the rain, yet still it was there. The window between us.

Then how it relates to people. You can be so close physically, yet so far away emotionally. The opposite is also true isn’t it? Feeling emotionally very close yet physically far away from someone.

This next poem is concerned with relationships and hopes. The way love takes flight as a bird on a wing. The same wind that buoys you, can change to whip you.

Love is also a message in a bottle.

We cast it out there with good intention hoping it will land on our paradise isle. But sometimes the other person doesn’t see our true message inside, just the pretty bottle, and what’s more, it doesn’t always make the land.

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